Dear McDonald's,
I love your fries! Even though they are greasy and fattening, something about them makes me crave more. I don't care what you put in your fries to make them so good but keep on adding it because that's what makes you my most favourite fast food restaurant in the entire world. You may be wondering why I like you so much, well, it is because of your amazingly delicious fries. Each golden fry that I eat is like heaven in a stick. My mouth waters as I think about the crispness of your fry as I bite into it, the explosion of flavour in the soft insides, and the joy I receive when it goes down my throat and into my stomach. All my taste buds are tingling now after writing that and I can't wait to go and buy my fifth daily serving of large fries from you. Even though I truly do not wish to stop eating fries, you must help me curb my appetite for them because I am sure that I am addicted to them. If I even miss one of my 10 scheduled fry binges, I cannot function and huddle in a dark corner. My friends have told me that unless they approach me with fries, I attack them and one has even shown me a scar I have given him. This is very serious and although I love you and your fries very much, I love my friends more and you will find a way to help me or I will sue you.
Sincerely, Bobette
Level 4-
ReplyDeleteLiked it a lot - some grammar issues, and tense problems. Very well written though